Monday, September 28, 2015

I Believe

Final Draft   
9/22/15


                I believe in knowledge and strength, my reason for believing Is my will to be stronger and successful in life.
                
I'm going to accomplish and overcome obstacles. I was raised knowing that my family couldn't give me much  because of our race and disadvantages. They did their best and grew accustomed to having an insignificant amount of supplies, but they could still give us a home the example my family gave me  has influenced me to the point that I will repay them with being successful and gaining knowledge and strength.

So far my experience with this belief  has been fruitful and I enjoy learning new things and always trying to exceed my limits , absorbing information like a vacuum and trying to find something new to learn. strength is something I have to gain by experience so I will eventually understand what it is to be strong.

Someone I encountered that had admirable strength came into my life and told me about what they experienced to gain knowledge and strength, somehow he had a powerful expression that hit me like a bullet and made me feel vulnerable. Most people would ignore the feeling and think that it isn't something they should worry about but i think it is very important to try and improve yourself  , I devoted myself to this belief because of reality.

 I'll start to grasp the meaning and reason why i chose to believe in knowledge and strength meanwhile i will try as hard  as i can to drill into what i believe in . I'm sure there are many others that agree with me ,having others can help tremendously on what you want to accomplish .

5 comments:

  1. I would have loved to hear more about this person's story that had such an effect on you! I think it would have an equally profound effect on your readers.

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  2. I like how this person uses sarcasm to make his thesis powerful.

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  3. I would also love to know more about how this person made you powerful and gave you so much strength to look forward to the success you want.

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  4. very good job my friend keep it up....... nice go chs:)

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  5. I really like how you determine wit your beliefs. I agree with you that everyone must have to improve themselves and gain knowledge because life isn't just standing in a same spot, life is about to move one and learn new things. Also, I hope you would keep fight hard to learn more and get the success that you wanted.

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